Almost Alice school performance poem

The curtain rose

Everyone took a pose

The gleaming light shone on the  white army their graceful  , beautiful ,

captivating dance filled the stage with delight and wonder as the steps astounded the audience.

contained wonder………………


A blood army of impostors march in and interrupt the dance!

Their loud aggressive musical fight draws the audience closer , closer , closer

The steps are scary  and roaring

Pure madness

The curtain rose

and everyone took a pose


Spelling week # 8

Activity 1

I am a honorable man don’t be dreadful.

Terrorists took killed everyone present.

Recycle your things at home so we can keep Australia tidy.

Packaging is bad for the environment.

The partials in gases are crazy!

“I have a suggestion if anyone is interested”. Asked Mary scared.

” Today we shall learn about molecules“. Said Mrs Webster.

I love the book ‘ An Imperial Affliction’.

Activity 2

Authors normally write to teach the reader a lesson. Not just when the bad guy does bad things and the honorable hero saves the girl who the bad guy tried to kill. Deeper life lessons about hope courage and love. Some times the writer writes because he or she are gong through a period of time when  they turn to writing to heal . Or to simply tell a good old story.



100 Word story

My heart was thumping! I was running away from the Nazis!!

I could see the old barb wire gateway  in the distance. I was bolting  for it with my friend Darcy. I glanced over. She stumbled over rolling over and over blood gushing from her head. I pulled her up and threw her over my limp body and began running.  I dropped her over the gate I jumped over. Pain from my legs was burring. I could see blood every were over my body.Darcy’s head was still bleeding furiously. I was running in the black, cold moonlight blood everywhere…….HELP!


Letter to SafeWay and Coles about caged chickens

Dear Safeway and Coles,


I am just asking your company to stop selling caged eggs.  It should not be that hard.


Caging chickens is an offence and it needs to stop now!

You don’t need to break a chicken to break an egg. If you had any consideration for animals, you would not be killing these innocent chickens for no good reason. You need to stop this NOW!! I am outraged and distressed that you would hurt these chickens for NO good reason at all.

These chickens are suffering and you are supporting this horrific event that should be against the law! I will not shop at your store if you continue this. I will continue to write and do everything in my power to stop this!!!!!  Before I continue this argument I think you should know what happens to these chickens.

They are put into battery cages. These cages are not even big enough for one chicken to spread its wings .They are so stressed and scared that they peck at each other. So their beaks are cut off with a hot blade. This is incredibly painful.  She is given no painkillers! Inside the cage it is impossible for her to walk or exercise. The chickens will not lay their eggs in the open. They so desperately want to nest their eggs! So they nest them in already dead,rotting chickens! You put those eggs in a carton and sell them!  When chicks are born it would be a happy time for a chicken. This is not a happy time for a caged hen. Her chick is taken away from her. If it is a male they are suffocated or grinded as they cannot lay eggs. This is done at as little as one day old.

To eat they have to stick their heads out and eat. There are so many chickens that they push each other around which causes them to lose feathers and cut themselves. They often get infection from their cuts! They are not treated and often die! One caged chicken is lucky to live one year. They hardly ever live to one year.  If hens can’t lay anymore they are stuffed into boxes. While they are waiting to be killed they are hung by their legs. You can stop this so start now. So stop selling cage eggs!



Beginnings Middles and Endings story.

We learnt about beginnings middles and endings in a lesson.We learnt how to properly structure beginnings middles and endings. Here is the story I wrote.


Do you ever feel that you don’t quite fit. In a world  full of  people waiting to claim there place. I might have to wait a little longer as I glance at my safeway name tag that reads Mable Bell. The mind numbing sound of the slight beep coming from the machine made my headache. I grab the milk and scan it. ” How are you” I ask to a surprising chirpy women.” Great thank you” she smiled. You would think she just won a oscar the way she blabbered  on about her weekend. ‘So on the weekend I am flying up to see the in laws’ she said. ‘Then I am cooking my husband fish and veggies to keep him healthy’ she explained.’Hence the fish’.I whispered under my breath . I wished that she did not have so many groceries as she was boring me to death about her life and plans. Once I had finished you it felt like christmas came and went. I glanced at the clock.’My shift is over’ I shouted.The mind numbing beeping and the  slight chatter stopped everybody stared. Whoops I thought. Um um um carry on. Everybody turned back to there work and continued.

I clumped in my car and started the engine. My favorite song came on.My phone started ringing. With a sense of urgency I started looking for it.Forgetting that I was driving I took my hands off the steering wheel!The car swerved into another breaking open the window screen with great force. Bits of glass were spitting at my. My body was overloading with pain as the flipped over.All I could see was blood.All I could feel was pain.All I could her were sirens screaming in my ears.Then I could feel people lifting me out of the car. Then black.

I up in a hospital. With badges hugging my face. Both my legs in plaster and my arms.A the sight of a man in a white coat I know its bad news. His face as solemn as a bird. His presents sends a shiver down my body.He explained what happened and how I shattered the bones in my leg.he tells me how I may never walk again a tear runs down my face.he tells me I am 21 and I have a long life ahead of me and I don’t need to walk to have a excellent and fulfilling life.

20 years later.

I am a very happy person. I have kids of my own.   I am a successful artist.Though I may never walk again I am happy for who I am. I have found my place in this world. Everyone does have a place you just need to explore it.

100 word story

Being a servant is hard. I wish I could see my mum but I know she’s dead. Instead, I work for old mean rich women and men. My fingers are numb. I stop and squeeze them. I feel a cold strap against my back. It puts a cherry atop of the painful ice cream that has been served up to me. A whip hits me again.  A booming voice instructs me to continue. I want to run away …but where could I go? I scrub the beautiful, dainty sequined dresses soaking in the water. The pain oh the pain. HELP!

100 WC

If we want Lucy to have a healthy and  safe life she needs to go to school! Imagine not properly being able to understand the world. Being held back from the ability to read, write ,and explore the world as we know it! As a society, all we  need to do is give her the right to go to school. We could send a bus to her so she would not have to walk. But if we can solve really big problems in our world. We can solve this one. We could give Lucy and other children like her a chance!

Spelling week # 3 Term # 2

Activity 1

Experiment-  Is something that you do to see what happens.
Viscosity- How watery something is
Hydrogen- It is a gas it is found in water.
Helium- is a gas it is in balloons
Composition- putting things together to form one.

Activity 2

The  four states of matter. Are things all around us. Like plasma, gas,liquid and solid. In water there is hydrogen. Hydrogen is a gas.Fire is plasma. Water is a liquid. A table is a solid. Everything is made up of atoms. The atoms form it in to either plasma , gas , liquid,or solid.

Spelling Week 10

Activity 1 –

Write a paragraph using 5 list words. Make the paragraph interesting to the reader;
remember word choice as a trait to embellish your paragraph.

The wind swiftly swooped past the gathered people.A murmur of confusion stretchered along the crowd.The Premier had called the town to the hall. His security  go up.A baby winced as the tall man began to enter the stage. He started to mumble about justice and the right that nurses and teachers should be paid more.Nobody listened that was in till the premier came up to speak. He shouted and said that no one would have the job they had if there was not teachers.’THEY DESERVE BETTER’! He yelled. He spoke about how the parliament were going to start funding the nurses and teachers better! Everyone cheered!

Activity 2

Use a dictionary to assist you to formulate the meaning of 5 list words.

Justice- has more than one meaning. Justice can describe the system that makes sure the community is fair and justice is available to all. For example the police make sure we have justice in our community by arresting criminals. Judges make sure we have justice by putting people who do the wrong thing in jail.

Parliament there are two types of Parliament in Australia and State. Federal Parliament is in Canberra and Tony Abbott is the Prime Minister of the Federal Government which runs the whole of Australia in partnership with State governments. The State Parliament in Victoria has a Premier called Denis Napthine and he is the head of the Victorian Government. Which is where parliamentarians who are elected by voters.

Security- A group of people who prevent danger.

Murmur- Saying something not very loudly.

Premier- Someone who is in charge of there state.

Activity 3


a. Which  side of the river do you think we should stake our
claim? “ asked the prospector.
b. The witch used magic to turn fool’s gold into real gold.
c. The police constable insisted that the gold diggers identify which of their fellow miners were claim jumpers.
d. “Do you think the witch in the story was real or imaginary?” asked the

Which, gold coach should we bail up next ?” asked the bushranger.
f. On which continent did the Spaniards search fruitlessly for the fabled
City of Gold which witch was they named “El Dorado, The Gilded One”?

Activity 4


Explain the difference between the following Homophones:
a. Weather, wether and whether. Weather means the temperature of something. Wether- not sure. Whether or not you get what you want you have to deal with it.

b. Way, weigh, and whey. Way is a direction something like- That is the wrong way to go turn left.Weigh means how much something’s or someone’s mass is or weight. Whey is the watery part of the milk.
c. Wear, where and we’re- Wear means something that you put on. Where means where are you . We’re means a group of people.
d. Praise, prays and preys. Praise means worshipping something. Prays means a religious way to talk to god- The girl prays for her mother. Preys is something like the tiger crept up on his prey.
e. Saw, soar and sore- Saw means you have spotted something. Soar is something like- The girl saw the the bird soar through the sky. Sore is if you hurt your self like the sore was bleeding!
f. Wails, Wales and whales.Wales is a place in Europe.Whales is a animal that is very very very big! Wail means a type of crying like the girl wailed in agony.
g. Right, write and rite. Right means something is correct like you got it right. Write means to tell something on a piece of paper. Rite is a religious thing.

h. Awe, oar, or and ore. Awe – something that you’re overwhelmed or scared by. Oar – something that you use to row a boat. Or – when you’re comparing something. Ore –  something you find when mining, it holds the precious jewels.


100 wc week # 28

My father taught me every thing about life. He always told funny stories.Every night when he got home I would run up and hug him. We would race back..

I grew up and had a kid of my own. Dad grew older with me but his memory faded.

I came to visit him one day. I sat by his bed. He said to me you go on son you go on. He passed away a while after. I sat by his coffin …but I thought I had enough time… To say goodbye. He knows I love him that’s what matters.